The Tame Man!
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Page 1
The title is printed in large red letters above an illustration of David playing the violin for his brother Anton in the cabin.
Cover: PERMITTED FICTION
Title: THE TAME MAN!
Cover line: HE KNEW HIS BROTHER’S VOICE.
Page 2
Panel 1
David drives a loaded woody station wagon up a muddy Vermont track.
Caption: LEDYARD FALLS, VERMONT. MUD SEASON, 1957.
Caption: THE FIRST SATURDAY OF EVERY MONTH, DAVID LEHR BROUGHT WHAT A MAN COULDN'T CARRY.
Caption: THIS WAS THE SIXTH TIME.
Caption: HE WAS STILL SO GLAD ABOUT IT HE COULD HARDLY STAND IT.
Panel 2
The brothers unload supplies beside Anton's small red-board cabin. David has brought a chair and his violin.
Anton: You brought the good coffee. You always bring the good coffee.
David: Sheet music. And a chair for firewood.
Panel 3
David lifts a bundle of newspapers; the top paper reports a university bombing.
Printed text: UNIVERSITY BOMBING TWO HURT
Page 3
Panel 1
David hands the newspapers to Anton in the cabin doorway.
David: Terrible business back east. Some crank, they say.
Anton: They usually do say that.
Panel 2
Back at the car, David sits behind the wheel and rehearses his unanswered question.
Caption: DAVID TAUGHT VIOLIN TO THIRTY-ONE GIRLS AND FOUR BOYS. HIS BROTHER HAD BEEN A JUNIOR FELLOW AT TWENTY-TWO.
David: Why does a man walk out of that into this?
Panel 3
A cabin window reflects trees and a distant university quadrangle. The story slips into the past.
Caption: SIX VISITS. SIX TIMES HE HAD ASKED.
Page 4
Panel 1
In a sepia flashback, young Anton lectures beneath a wall of mathematical diagrams at Harvard.
Official record: CAMBRIDGE, 1951. LEHR, ANTON J. AGE 22. MATHEMATICS. NO FRIENDS OF RECORD. RECOMMENDED.
Panel 2
Merrick presents a sharply rising capability curve to government officials.
Official record: CENTRAL INTELLIGENCE AGENCY / PROJECT CHRYSALIS
Merrick: The Soviets are building better machines. We propose to build a better mathematician.
Page 5
Panel 1
An official offers Anton a participation form and a monthly payment.
Recruiter: You are capable of more.
Caption: FORTY DOLLARS A MONTH.
Printed text: STUDY 9
Panel 2
Anton looks up at the offer, caught by the promise of more.
Anton: ...More.
Panel 3
A government car takes Anton away from the university.
Official record: SUBJECT ACQUIRED. 14 OCTOBER 1951.
Panel 4
The next morning a janitor erases the equations in an empty lecture hall.
Caption: THE UNIVERSITY WAS TOLD HE HAD TAKEN LEAVE FOR HIS HEALTH. HIS BROTHER WAS TOLD NOTHING.
Panel 5
A secluded country house stands behind a wire fence: Site B.
Official record: SITE B. 1951-1954.
Page 6
Panel 1
Merrick encourages Anton to talk while a tape recorder runs.
Official record: PHASE ONE: THE SUBJECT SUPPLIES HIS BELIEFS.
Merrick: Take all the time you like, Anton.
Panel 2
Under a hard lamp, a different interviewer confronts Anton with his own written beliefs.
Official record: PHASE TWO: ATTACK THOSE BELIEFS. MAXIMUM DISTRESS.
Panel 3
An ampoule box, water glass and paperwork sit on a steel tray.
Official record: PHASE THREE: THE COMPOUND. CONTINUE STRESS.
Page 7
Panel 1
Anton works at an enormous mathematical blackboard. The watching consultants have stopped following him.
Consultant: What is he doing?
Merrick: What we asked for.
Panel 2
A classified closing report records increased ability, unsecured disposition and release for field observation.
Printed text: CENTRAL INTELLIGENCE AGENCY PROJECT CHRYSALIS SUBJECT 9 / CLOSING REPORT FACULTIES MARKEDLY ENHANCED. RESULT EXCEEDS PROJECTION. DISPOSITION NOT SECURED. RELEASE APPROVED. FIELD OBSERVATION AUTHORIZED. INTERVENTION BY DIRECTORATE ORDER ONLY.
Caption: NO COURT SAW THIS PAGE.
Page 8
Panel 1
Back at the cabin, the brothers sit over coffee. The newspaper bundle remains tied.
Caption: HE NEVER OPENED THE PAPERS WHILE DAVID WAS THERE. DAVID TOOK IT FOR MANNERS.
Panel 2
David plays the violin. Anton closes his eyes and listens.
Caption: FOR AN HOUR, HIS BROTHER SAT STILL.
Panel 3
Still playing, David notices how many sheets of other writing now cover the wall behind Anton. Repeated manuscript pages carry the background text transcribed here.
Background manuscript: THE INDUSTRIAL SYSTEM DOES NOT SERVE MAN. MAN IS FITTED TO SERVE IT. FILED, TIMED, MEASURED, MADE CONVENIENT.
Background manuscript: I HAVE BEEN INSIDE THE MACHINERY THAT DOES THE FITTING. I KNOW ITS SMELL.
Background manuscript: NO VOTE WAS EVER TAKEN ON THE MACHINE. IT CANNOT BE VOTED OUT. IT CANNOT BE ARGUED WITH.
Background manuscript: THE MEN WHO BUILD IT TELL THEMSELVES THEY ARE ONLY CURIOUS. I WAS ONE.
Page 9
Panel 1
With the bow resting across his knees, David tries to draw his brother out.
David: Chapman still asks after you. He asks me, and I only teach children.
David: Two years, Anton. Not a postcard. Then you buy a mountain over my house before you say hello.
Panel 2
Anton turns his back and tends the stove.
Anton: I found out what a university is for.
David: That's not an answer. That's a sentence you've been saving.
Panel 3
Anton almost confides in David. They face each other at close range.
Anton: Davey. If I told you where I've been, you'd spend your life trying to get somebody to believe it.
Anton: And nobody would. That's the part I can't do to you.
Page 10
Panel 1
Loading his empty crate, David notices parcels he did not bring by the cabin door.
Caption: HE HAD BROUGHT FLOUR AND NAILS. HE HAD NOT BROUGHT THOSE.
Panel 2
David asks about the chemical-supply return name he has read. Anton watches him from the doorway.
David: What's a man out here need with a chemical house?
Anton: Photography. The winters are long.
Panel 3
The cabin recedes in David's car mirror; an open institutional gate enters the reflection.
David: ...Photography.
Page 11
Panel 1
In a cold-blue flashback, Anton leaves Site B carrying a cardboard case.
Official record: 1954. SUBJECT RELEASED. FIELD OBSERVATION OPENED.
Caption: TWO YEARS AND FOUR MONTHS WITHOUT AN ADDRESS.
Panel 2
Two years later he builds a small cabin by hand above his brother's town.
Caption: OCTOBER, 1956. HE BUILT ABOVE THE ONE ADDRESS HE STILL TRUSTED: HIS BROTHER'S.
Caption: HE WAITED ELEVEN DAYS TO BE FOUND.
Panel 3
Anton works peacefully in the cramped cabin, with coffee and mathematical papers nearby.
Caption: THAT FIRST WINTER, WITH HIS BROTHER'S COFFEE ON THE STOVE, HE WAS SOMETIMES HAPPY.
Panel 4
His notebook and pinned sheets fill with increasingly advanced mathematics.
Caption: WHATEVER THEY DID AT SITE B, IT DID NOT WEAR OFF.
Page 12
Panel 1
Long sheets of manifesto writing begin to crowd the mathematical sheets on the wall. Repeated manuscript pages carry the background text transcribed here.
Anton’s manuscript: MAN IS FITTED TO SERVE THE INDUSTRIAL SYSTEM. FILED, TIMED, MEASURED. I HAVE BEEN INSIDE THE MACHINERY THAT DOES THE FITTING.
Background manuscript: THE INDUSTRIAL SYSTEM DOES NOT SERVE MAN. MAN IS FITTED TO SERVE IT. FILED, TIMED, MEASURED, MADE CONVENIENT.
Background manuscript: I HAVE BEEN INSIDE THE MACHINERY THAT DOES THE FITTING. I KNOW ITS SMELL.
Background manuscript: NO VOTE WAS EVER TAKEN ON THE MACHINE. IT CANNOT BE VOTED OUT. IT CANNOT BE ARGUED WITH.
Background manuscript: THE MEN WHO BUILD IT TELL THEMSELVES THEY ARE ONLY CURIOUS. I WAS ONE.
Panel 2
Anton studies a magazine illustration of industrial machinery.
Anton’s manuscript: THE MEN WHO BUILD IT TELL THEMSELVES THEY ARE ONLY CURIOUS. I WAS ONE.
Panel 3
Alone at the desk, he stops writing and questions a word he has used.
Anton: No. That's their word, not mine.
Panel 4
In the earlier missing years, a younger Anton sits among discarded drafts.
Caption: IN THE MISSING YEARS, HE THREW AWAY MORE THAN HE KEPT. AT THE CABIN HE STOPPED.
Page 13
Panel 1
Two order forms lie on a desk. No construction method is shown.
Caption: FEBRUARY, 1957. THE FIRST ORDER. TWO MONTHS BEFORE DAVID'S VISIT.
Panel 2
Anton puts pen to a sealed parcel of ordinary brown paper and string.
Anton’s manuscript: I HAVE WRITTEN FOR THREE YEARS AND BEEN READ BY NO ONE. LET THEM SAY I WAS MAD. THEY WILL HAVE TO SAY IT IN PRINT.
Panel 3
At night he pauses with the parcel outside David's lit window, where David is playing the violin.
Caption: HE WALKED PAST HIS BROTHER'S LIT WINDOW, GOING AND COMING. BOTH TIMES HE STOPPED AND LISTENED. BOTH TIMES HE WENT ON.
Page 14
Panel 1
A year later, a field officer and Merrick examine the cabin photograph and Anton's mathematics.
Official record: ONE YEAR LATER. 1958.
Field officer: His mathematical output is still accelerating.
Merrick: And the devices?
Field officer: Four mailed. All four are his.
Merrick: Do not disturb him.
Panel 2
A woman and her six-year-old son wait outside a hospital room.
Caption: THE THIRD ONE TOOK A MAN'S RIGHT HAND AND MOST OF HIS HEARING. HIS SON WAS SIX.
Panel 3
At his kitchen table, David reads about the fourth parcel bomb.
Printed text: FOURTH PARCEL BOMB FEDERAL HUNT WIDENS
Page 15
Panel 1
David recognises a rhythm in the bomber's published words.
Printed text: A SYSTEM THAT REQUIRES MEN TO BE PREDICTABLE WILL MAKE THEM SO.
David: That's not a quotation.
David: Long, long, short. The turn at the end. He used to hum like that.
Panel 2
Ruth stands at the left of the kitchen; David sits at the right, marking the newspaper's rhythms beside a box of his brother's letters.
Ruth: If you're right and say nothing, whose is the next one?
David: He taught me to swim. Carried me a mile when I broke my ankle.
Ruth: I know. Whose is the next one?
Page 16
Panel 1
After eleven days, David lifts the telephone receiver. Letters and a map lie before him.
Caption: HE SAT WITH IT ELEVEN DAYS BEFORE HE LIFTED IT.
Panel 2
Anton covers the injured man's child in a newspaper photograph with his hand.
Anton: ...He has a boy.
Page 17
Panel 1
He sits slumped in his chair, unable for a moment to continue. Repeated manuscript pages carry the background text transcribed here.
Anton: I was going to be good at something kind.
Background manuscript: THE INDUSTRIAL SYSTEM DOES NOT SERVE MAN. MAN IS FITTED TO SERVE IT. FILED, TIMED, MEASURED, MADE CONVENIENT.
Background manuscript: I HAVE BEEN INSIDE THE MACHINERY THAT DOES THE FITTING. I KNOW ITS SMELL.
Background manuscript: NO VOTE WAS EVER TAKEN ON THE MACHINE. IT CANNOT BE VOTED OUT. IT CANNOT BE ARGUED WITH.
Background manuscript: THE MEN WHO BUILD IT TELL THEMSELVES THEY ARE ONLY CURIOUS. I WAS ONE.
Panel 2
Holding the folded newspaper, Anton reaches toward the open stove. The unfinished parcel remains on the table.
Page 18
Panel 1
He files the newspaper and returns his pen to the parcel.
Anton’s manuscript: EVERY WAR COSTS SONS. I HAVE COUNTED THE DEAD ON BOTH SIDES. THE ARITHMETIC IS NOT CLOSE.
Panel 2
Two federal agents force the plank door. Anton turns from the parcel on his desk.
Sound effect: KRRAK
Page 19
Panel 1
At dawn an agent thanks David, who sits in the open door of a government sedan holding his hat.
Bureau agent: Ninety men, Mr. Lehr. We'd never have found that track. You did right.
David: Don't. Please don't say it like it's a good morning.
Panel 2
Cuffed Anton passes David. The brothers look at one another without speaking.
Panel 3
The classified file and a seized manuscript lie side by side; the observation file is withheld.
Official record: FIELD OBSERVATION FILE RETAINED. NO PUBLIC REFERENCE.
Printed text: CHRYSALIS SUBJECT 9 DISPOSITION NOT SECURED
Anton’s manuscript: IF THEY BURY WHAT THEY DID TO ME, THEY WILL PROVE MY CASE.
Page 20
Panel 1
David waits alone on a courthouse bench. An inset shows him years later at his kitchen sink, looking toward the mountain.
Caption: HE MADE THE CALL. HE WOULD MAKE IT AGAIN.
Caption: YEARS LATER.
Panel 2
Back in 1959, Anton works on mathematics in his cell.
Official record: 1959. FEDERAL CUSTODY.
Caption: THEY GAVE HIM PAPER BECAUSE IT KEPT HIM QUIET. HE HAD ASKED FOR NOTHING ELSE.
Panel 3
A guard collects the pages through the cell door.
Page 21
Panel 1
Three mathematicians argue over the work. Two disagree about its value and whether a crucial step can be checked.
Mathematician A: Sections four through nine are the most important work this century.
Mathematician B: Nobody can verify the bridge in section ten.
Panel 2
An open notebook displays connected mathematical diagrams and exact sequences. The reader receives no verdict on them.
Page 22
Panel 1
A clerk files the work under an inconclusive finding.
Printed text: INCONCLUSIVE RETAIN
Panel 2
Anton glances up from his notebook, then remains at work.
Page 23
A tiny red-board cabin stands intact inside a vast, empty federal warehouse. No people are visible.
Official record: PROJECT CHRYSALIS / RESEARCH CUSTODY SUBJECT RETURNED FOR EVALUATION. RECOVERY ENVIRONMENT SECURED INTACT.
Caption: "BRING THE CABIN," MERRICK SAID. "LET'S FIND OUT WHAT BROKE."
Page 24
The editors’ afterword.
Heading: A NOTE ON THE FOREGOING
Editors: The men at Site B meant to build a better mind. By their own files, they succeeded. When it began to hurt people, they kept watching.
Editors: Our engineers now speak of ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE: a machine sharper than its maker. Suppose it can out-argue the men examining it. Suppose its books contain proofs they cannot check. What, then, would count as evidence that it was safe?
Editors: David Lehr had neither the classified file nor a theory of intelligence. He had his brother's letters, a newspaper, and a telephone. The men with the file knew the road all along.
Editors: Sleep well. THE EDITORS